However - the sound you used for your melody at first got annoying after hearing it throughout the song.
Also - the high pitch increase of that one note is good, but can be a killer on the ears.
If you fixed those things, then it would be great!
I like the gradual buildup. It's nice! :)
Your Music is AMAZING! Keep it up!
Holy shit that buildup was AMAZING!
Keep posting your stuff on newgrounds!
Thank you - and Will do.
I'm guessing you're not critiquing?
Either way, thanks again.
Not too Shabby :)
I like the melody. However, if I were you I would make the lead build up a bit more.
Other than that minor suggestion, its good (:
Hey thank for the suggestion. :D I'm always happy to get advice. :] It's the only way to get better.
...the gradual buildup. The beat you have provided around 1:40, is stunning.
Good stuff, keep it up . 5/5, 8/ 10 for me
.... i like the beat ^_^
Agreed with Helth
*Refers to title*
Yea, basicly this song DOES sound like something you have made in the past - chaoz fantasy, furthermore this does not mean that this isnt a good song, all I'm saying is try gonig for something completely different in the future (:
Overall - 9/10 5/5. Good job,
and this made top five how? >=o
I personally find this beat to be annoying >_<
That's opinions, my friend.
Sounds good so far - but I think it fails if it was designed for a romantic setting.
Good job anyhow
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